Proofreading

Okay, I need a bit of help. I've gotten a draft of my petition letter drawn up, and I need your help proofreading it. Any help is appreciated: spelling, grammar, word usage, adding things, removing things.... you know the drill. I want this letter to be absolutely perfect. Only thing is, yes, it's got to be long. I was told to be detailed, and dammit, I want the person who reads this letter to feel that they went through all this crap THEMSELVES (Goddesses, English needs a singular gender-neutral pronoun). That said:

( Don't let the cheer-babble scare you. It's really long, by the way, and open-ended, because I suck at ending letters and stuff. )

I also plan on including two of my journal entries as more supporting documentation of how much cheerleading ruined my life. What's better than a first-hand account, huh?

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